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frank's avatar

This is amazing Reminds me of some of those old tales from folklore that I really enjoy

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

What stayed with me was the way the poem keeps shifting between tenderness, exhaustion, danger, absurdity, and care without ever forcing one final meaning over the others.

The conversation with the child carries so much underneath it — loneliness, survival, deflection, affection, violence, imagination — all moving quietly through ordinary language and weather.

And the ending lands beautifully because it remains playful and unsettling at the same time.

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